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EDIT: Just changing the submission name for better organisation and reference.
Also added media info at the bottom of the description. -- Well, not so much an animatic at this stage (maybe) but still very sketchy. The basics of the animation is down so now it's critique time for realz. Advance Critique Encouraged! I've added the ears and expressions where necessary at this point. It's still far from finished but now you can see what's going on. I'll probably change that dialogue bit with Felicia since trying to lipsync with no voices is rather difficult. Dunno I need to show her speaking. The chase at the end is alright, though I'm much happier with Felicia's movement than Tabby's. I may have to work on her running into shot and stopping. Might have to watch for the shrinking heads as well ^^' Anyway, lemme know what you guys think! Media: Flash 8 Felicia & Tabby © Keiron White Comments I think it looks really good so far! Love the facial expressions
 Looking forward to see the finished animation ^^-- rrrrrrrrrrr~ poke! [link]  I think it looks pretty good so far with the expressions ^^ lol I just now realized Felicia slipped while chasing Tabby XD;
can't wait to see more :3 -- I do have a real life ya know. I'm not always here for you. artwork is my life and talent, that I can feel free in imagining in what I believe.  join today -> ~AerrowXPiperClub :3  Still looks great!
I'm assuming that if you're not changing the dialogue altogether, you're going to change how it appears? because at the moment the 'what the heck' bit goes too fast and I missed half of it the first time through  Apart from that though, it's looking great - did I see Tabitha swear?  *gasp* -- *poof*     hahaha awesome well done
-- ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Drawing is a way of live if you don't draw?? well that means you are DEAD same go's for gaming  Looking forward to a finished product. Rock on man. are you on newgrounds.com?
-- Live everyday as if you die tomorrow UNtill then read check out my strips : [link]   she's cheeky yet still so cute
-- Please call me Maddy/Linz/Linzsu/Lindsey ^w^ -------------------------------------------------------------- My  and Soul © ~Blue-Timestone since 2005 till forever!~Blue-Timestone *Wolfox-of-life (Actually that was Felicia swearing
Easter egg for ya)The actual written dialogue was just there as a timing reference more than anything else. More so I could get the mouth movements in the right places, though that's hard without any actual recorded dialogue as I said. I'd record myself but I don't see me doing a very good impression of her voice ^^' -- It's gotta get harder before it gets any easier. Remember yesterday, prepare for tomorrow, live for today. I'm not, but I've considered joining. I just feel that I have to produce a lot more stuff before I can justify it though
-- It's gotta get harder before it gets any easier. Remember yesterday, prepare for tomorrow, live for today.  I can imagine you could give Tabitha a bit of slide as she stops in the living room before she takes off again, with a more pronounced launch or leap. This would also portend Felicia's slipping and falling.
Felicia climbing over the easy chair should be punctuated with the chair being moved, or rocked, to show some of her weight. It also adds to the general chaos of having a chase in the house. -- "Saving the universe. One minute at a time."  does it help to plot out the whole animation in sketches first? then go back over with the final lines? because I've been doing one animation at a time (sketch/lines/color) then moving onto the next and it seems to take forever...
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