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Sooner or later I'll move this to my scraps.

Another practice animation. This was a spur-of-the-moment thing, I hadn't animated much in Flash and needed the practice.
I've also always wanted to animate a fight scene :p
As you may have guessed, it's Felicia (White Shadow) fighting a knife wielding adversary. Sooner or later I'll have a full picture of her.

The good: I like the movements of the characters. It's clearly a high-paced battle, and I don't seem to have made any obvious continuity errors. I also managed to keep the anatomy relatively consistent. The camera work was good to experiment with too. I love how the end came out ^__^
The bad: Personally, I think some of the timing is off in places. Something I need to work on, but at least it's not as bad as some of my other animations. I also realied a little too heavily on 1's in this one (animation term). Also, the eye/mouth shots before the end just plain suck.
Other than that, I'm happy with this one and may even do a fully rendered version when I can.

Edit: Added some secondary animation such as the hair and dress. Gave it a preloader as it was getting a bit large. I also got rid of those weird green lines at the end, and shortened the pause in Felicia's side kick.

Media: All drawn in Macromedia Flash MX 2004

(now why couldn't/didn't I animate like this on my course?)

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:iconwpnx:
omg thats pimp. lines are so clean. and movement is great. just have a lil problem w/ the kick in the reverse torso view ... looks kinda stiff or something but other than that its looking awesome.

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:iconfunkyalien:
I know what you mean, I couldn't quite get the angle right on that one.
Glad you like it though :D

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:iconrickiscool80:
:S i hate u sometimes u know that :P lol good work dude, but please....dont get any better or else i'll have to kick ure ass....NARUTO STYLE!!!!!!
:iconfunkyalien:
LOL :D Sorry man, it's something that just...happened. It was only meant to be the first 3 shots but I got carried away and spent all day doing it =p

Seems I'll have to practice my kickboxing, eh?

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:iconichigokurata:
Very lovely. :XD:

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:iconcatlinrose:
nice work never personally tried animation i think i'd suck at it any way

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:iconfunkyalien:
Nah, really you just have to learn the principles of animation. Not too hard, really. Then it's about practicing until you know what you're doing :)

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:iconkairi-moon:
Thats great! I luv the movement and choreagraphing of the fight scene! I luv the camera too! (I do film studies and now look at camera alot more!). Are you gonna finish it? It'll look very cool! Do it, do it! DO IT!!! =P

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Hehe, yeah hopefully I'll finish this sometime :) Like I said, I've always wanted to animate a fight scene, so I wanna see how this looks in full colour!

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:iconkairi-moon:
Yay! Can't wait!! When I learn animation I wanna do that!! =P

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