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Submitted: July 17, 2006
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Kaeman Volley linetest take 2by *funkyalien

Traditional Art / Animations / Pencil tests

Gar! I over-animated it

Ah well. I would have uploaded a larger verison of this but it seems to have trouble playing out each frame with the right timing. Probably just this slow@$$ computer though...
Either way, I took note of what you guys said. The ball's now in there so now more complaining about it! I also fixed his landings and the position of his left arm (which after trying the kick a few time I found was totally unnatural as it was before).

I think the timing seems to have more or less doubled since the first one, but either way it's still off since I had to use Animation Shop Pro. I'd guess this is running at about 20 fps rather than the intended 24

Well, the slide into the shot is way too slow. My bad, wasn't concentrating. Just as well it's the same frame moved over a few times then

I think he hands in the air a little too long on his volley, but that's personal opinion there.

Advanced Critique Encouraged again.
Lemme know what you think.

Don't hold back. I need to learn.

EDIT: Some other things I forgot to note.
There are now 40 drawn frames.
Once again I have the problem of keeping the masses the same throughout the animation, though it's not as noticable this time.
The chesting the ball action seems...off. Dunno how.

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~Surrealista88 Sep 14, 2010

Awesome, it's my favourite animation in your gallery

~Surrealista88 Feb 4, 2010

*O*

It's so great

!projectchaos17 Feb 6, 2008

cool... I tried a animatin test tooo ... this looks GREAT man ... I still need to work on how fluid mine's looks though... here's mines ... could ya take a look and tell me how it is [link]