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Anim Critique part 2

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It's that time again!
Chances are that I'm gonna just go with this one since I'm running a little short on time, but that doesn't mean that I don't want crits, so...

Advanced Critique is ON! :)

Big thanks to everyone that critiqued the last one; you've all been a big help! I'll try and get back to people soon as I can. Also there was apparently an issue with the looping on the last one. Just so you know, it loops automatically so if it's not doing so for you, right click and check the option. If it's still not looping, refresh the browser and it should work.

Righto, this one still isn't quite perfect but I can make any changes on the final version. Truth be told, I'm probably
going into too much detail as it is for the purpose of what this is for, but I wanna learn.

Anyway, the head movement isn't perfect and neither is the tail , but at least this time it actually looks more like a lion than some sort of deformed puma/dog/thing. And look! Ears! Now quit complainin' :/

Just kidding. But really, rip it up people :D

Media: Toon Boom Studio 4
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Paradox-2892's avatar
I really like it :) the only thing you might change is the shoulder movements; making the shoulders stick out a little over the back. Other than that, it's great :)